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Work in progress - update by bronart
Work in progress - update
I took the advice you's gave me and reduced the length of her head. I also ended up redoing the whole background, foreground, legs, hand.... etc.
Now I think I am almost happy enough to put it up in my exhibition .. just want to work on the foreground a bit more.
Let me know your thoughts if you have any other suggestions, I've just about ran out of time to do more to this painting as it will be hanging in the show in just over a week, but if it doesn't sell I plan to keep working on it.
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Work in progress - suggestions requested by bronart
Work in progress - suggestions requested
I'm a bit stuck on this work in progress, not entirely sure what I don't like about it, I think it's mostly the hair (I have painted the top of her head too long, and I need some highlighted areas on the left side of the hair near the face), the tone of the skin (looks a bit dead to me) and possibly the expression, but after having a debate with my husband about what needs to be done, I decided to post it on here, and see if there is any other suggestions that I hadn't thought of.

The idea is to make her look alone and a bit cold, but still kind of relaxed.

Before you point it out, I haven't finished the hand yet, or the background, or any of it for that matter, just looking for some general thoughts on what is wrong with it, in your opinion. :) thanks in advance
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Bronwyn Hill
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Zaigwast Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
:iconfemaleexcellence: Join us ! :D .... monthly art promotion awaits those with great art ! :#1:
If you do so, please submit to the correct category and do not forget about the rules. :aww:
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Drachenseele Featured By Owner Edited Jan 6, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
fav.me/d8cura9 featured :)

thank you for the wondeful art.
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bronart Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
oh, thank you for the feature :)
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popChar Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Professional
Stunning artworks :wow:
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bronart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you :)
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ravekitten Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful work!

~K@
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sytim Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
Your art is amazing!
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frederickofolympus Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Very lovely photorealistic art gallery. :)
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Zakatsukuyo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You are one of the best artist the world never known.. 
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The-Macattack Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
your paintings are amazing! Keep up the amazing work!
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